I got a chance to get to your website and read chapter seven. I did enjoy the general gist of the story but I don't do script reading very well. That's just a hang up I've got. Sorry.
I like stories that are in prose as they are easier to read and allow the reader to see the action in their mind rather than having it scripted. That being said, I wish the Buck Rogers Virtual Seasons well. You have a wonderful imagination and the storylines are interesting.
Thanks for pointing me to the website and your very interesting story. One Million Mark Zero and 1MM1 were fascinating concepts. The whole fantasy thing sort of reminded me of the Menagerie in The Original Series of Star Trek.